My Mum Is The Best In The World
Writing Sample Term 2
28 May 2014
My Mum has Medium length black-ish hair with a hint of red-ish colour when her hair shines in the sun. Her beautiful black eyes glimmer as she looks at
you with a grin on her face. She has long eyelashes with thin eyebrows.
She has red cherry lips and white pearl teeth which twinkles, she also has soft,smooth skin so she feels soft when I cuddle her.
She is very affectionate of me and loves me no matter what I do. She is very trendy and likes to buy the latest
things, she is generous,helpful,and kind, she shows respect to everyone that she meets.
My Mum takes care me and my dad if we get hurt because she’s a nurse at auckland hospital .She cooks for us too.She likes cooking new dishes and experimenting with food. She spends most of her time with me and helps me with my homework .She buys us clothes to wear food to eat .
My Mum likes to cook and go shopping at Postie .She enjoys spending time with me and watching
T.V with me .She LOVES to cuddle me and kiss me.
That’s why my Mum is my favourite person .
I really like your work it has powerful words and your work is heart warming good job keep it up Jeevan.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you said your mum likes to cook new dishes and and likes to experimenting on foods she sounds like a smart mum. Your work is well organised and I can really get a picture in my head
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you said your mum likes to cook new dishes and and likes to experimenting on foods she sounds like a smart mum. Your work is well organised and I can really get a picture in my head
ReplyDeletel am overwhelmed the way he has written it.It is really a masterpiece.Thankyou my son for loving me so much.
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