Persuasive blog writing

To all the digital classes in May Road School, In my opinion, I think that we should only put school work on our blogs. 


Firstly, The school owns the blog.
That means its meant for learning, right ?
So when they visit your blog, they will be expecting to see work, not something else ! They might think we don’t do any work at our school and we just do nothing, who wants that to happen?


Secondly, We are representing our school.
We must put our best work on our blog, and they might end up seeing something which is not up to standard, That means parents might not send their children to school, and we won’t have that much children come to our school.


And lastly, Everyone in the whole wide world will see it.
It would be really embarrassing if you have a big boo boo on your work, and every one would see it, it's like when you accidentally forget to put your pants on and everyone is laughing at you. Plus, who wants to see a mistake in someone's work, I know I don’t.

There are many reasons why you should only put school work on your blog, I have just named a few. This is the school's own blog that they created for you so you could represent our school show your best work to the whole world, They don’t want something rude for everyone to see. 
In conclusion, I truly think that we should only put school work on our blogs.